JKirchhoefel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Markiplier Animated | Until Dawn | NO]

I love all the visual extremes you have Markiplier go through and have all the background characters think he's crazy without any of them saying anything. Well done.

[A Super Mario Bros. Joke.]

Oh come on, you go through the whole joke of Mario wanting Luigi shoes but there's no end pay off. Does Mario get them and is like "Yes now it is I who can a jump the highest." Or does Luigi knock him off yelling "NO SHOES FOR YOU!" Or does the lone gooma runs away with the shoes after Mario through them into the bush. You need some kind of ending or resolution.

[TD-Appearances]

I liked it. I'm glad you don't listen to all the haters and trolls. You be you my friend. You be you.

Also the ending really made me laugh. :D Good job.

[paper animation]

Its a nice solid animation. However near the beginning I found that some of the sound and movement didn't seem to fit together. That however got better as the animation went on. But overall its good.

manzanimator responds:

thank you! yeah that's true, am still pretty noob with post production haha. Will have to improve that :P

[How to Catch Mew]

I'm sorry for the bad rating but I gotta. This seems like your still a bit new to animation. Its super short with very little actual movement in it. The audio isn't the best quality and really? You draw mew's tail as a penis. It doesn't add anything to the animation and honestly it just makes the whole thing seem childish. Look up on YouTube tricks on how to get better audio. Try having Mew or something move around before crushing him ex: flies buzz a round him head, Mew looking at the camera blinking derply, shadow gets bigger and bigger before "SPLAT!", have the trainer say more, SOMETHING!

[Life's a Zoo]

It's not bad. But I feel that it could benefit by having some more variety in camera shots. Having mostly only medium shots can get a bit repetitive and boring. Maybe add some close up shots like when the pig guy says "Look at this remote" cut to close of the remote. Don't be afraid to experiment a little! Also the audio is alright for the most part but there are times you can here things moving around in the background. But the exaggeration in the characters is nice its hard to show emotion without a mouth.

[New Pokemon! It's a Dog!!]

I'm fairly sure this is the reaction of most people who've seen the new Pokemon. Loved the little twist at the end. I also love how cute you make the dog look and having the camera angle look down on him in the first shot really helps. I feel though that you could have pulled back your camera from your human character. He doesn't have any head room. Through the whole thing his hat is chopped off.

[Define Intervention]

You know what I like it. It's a funny story that is very original. I especially liked the characters facial expressions and voice acting. My favorite being GOD's 'Oh shoot I just fucked up moment'. Although I find the character design choices strange. Just why is there carrots on there heads? I guess it just adds to absurdity of it all.

[Animation vs. Minecraft]

I loved this! You can tell so much with just stick figures and no words.

[the Last of the Dashkin]

This very beautifully made. It's very impressive that only one person written, directed and animated it.

chluaid responds:

thanks a lot! I'm looking forward to continuing Bitey's story.